"Sam I can't believe jack, that savage, is forcing us to"
" Join his horrible tribe of animals." said Sam finishing the sentence.
SamnEric looked at jack said no and spit at his feet as a sign of disrespect.
"But what that evil one roger did to piggy it was horrible even more horrible to us"
"Blood and brains everywhere which is ironic cause just the other day I was saying that"
"Piggy was the only on on the island that didn't lose his brain."
"Well the ocean has it now," said Eric with a glum face.
SamnEric were still tied up.
"Bring them to the dungeon," Jack said in a king like voice.
"Jack has so much power that if he were to tell anyone to jump off," said Sam.
"The highest point castle rock they would do it in a heartbeat." finished Eric.
But now jack ordered Roger and Maurice to stifle them both with a rag until they were the dungeon. roger prodded at both Sam and Eric's backs. put them in different sides of the dungeon, being away from each other should encourage each other to join my tribe," said jack with a sinister look in his eyes
Tuesday, March 4, 2008
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2 comments:
Anthony- Great job finishing up your blog! You definitely took a risk with your writing doing it in all dialogue. I liked it. It was interesting, entertaining, and had all the vocabulary needed. Just once again, watch those names. You need to capitalize them!
As i have with all my other comments I focus on spelling, and well, capitalize your nouns, and beginning of all your sentences and check your words. Nice technique with the extra spaces heheheh.
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