blog 14 revision of blog 8

Dear diary
yesterday was the worst day ever, the savages (jacks group) attacked us yesterday during our already unmerciful slumber, Ralph and Eric put up a pretty good fight, against each other i had seen them fighting each other while I was cowering in the corner. Seconds before we were attacked I was thinking that things couldn’t get worse and about what they did to me. Piggy wrote as he gesticulated with the hand he wasn't write.

Jack had stifled and smothered my face with his hand so that I couldn't say or see anything. it was dark and all i could do was feel and that wasn't much help because all i felt was someone jump on me and steel my glasses. I can't see. I don't have much self esteem to start with but to have Ralph hold my and to go places it makes me feel like I'm a little kid.

Ever since I have been stranded on this island I've been teased, hit, and humiliated but none of that stuff doesn’t bother me I'm used to it but nothing makes me crackers like when I got my precious glasses taken away.

Seconds before the attack I was watching the phosphorescent sky and then I got a crazy shudder which only happens when something bad is about to happen it is sort of a spidey sense

blog 13 revsion of 9

"Sam I can't believe jack, that savage, is forcing us to"

" Join his horrible tribe of animals." said Sam finishing the sentence.

SamnEric looked at Jack said “no”, and spit at his feet as a sign of disrespect.



"But what that evil one Roger did to Piggy it was horrible even more horrible to us"

"Blood and brains everywhere which is ironic cause just the other day I was saying that"

"Piggy was the only on on the island that didn't lose his brain."

"Well the ocean has it now," said Eric with a glum face.

SamnEric were still tied up.

"Bring them to the dungeon," Jack said in a king like voice.

"Jack has so much power that if he were to tell anyone to jump off," said Sam.

"The highest point castle rock they would do it in a heartbeat." finished Eric.

But now jack ordered Roger and Maurice to stifle them both with a rag until they were the dungeon. roger prodded at both Sam and Eric's backs. put them in different sides of the dungeon, being away from each other should encourage each other to join my tribe," said jack with a sinister look in his eyes

blog 12 testimoney

chap 1: jack leads the choir boys to ralph and piggy. he leads them very well like a king they follow him with great respect. the kids decide ralph is cheif even though jack really wanted the power.

chap 2: jack tells ralp about the pig that had been seen earleir that day that was found in the vines and ralph allows jack lead a group of hunters.

chap 3: jack trail the pig with great skill through the thick tendrils of the jungle but unlike him the pig is used to his surroundings and gets away before jack could make a feast out of him.

chap 4: at this piont of hunting jack has gotton so obsessed that he has forgotton about everything else besides the pig.

chap 5: jack used the beast to scare children into beleiving that he would be a better cheif by protecting them from the beast.

chap 6: ralph lets jack lead the expedition to find the beast on the side of the island that hasn't been explored yet.

chap 7: jack decides to hunt for a pig while on the expedition to find the beast. ralph has never been hunt and was exhilerated when he hit the pig in the snout with his spear but his thunder is stolen quickly when jack shows everyone his big gash.

chap 8: jack calls an assembly and informs everyone that the beast is real. he tells everyone that its eiter him or ralph and makes a tribe that no follows him to.

chap 9: jack gets back with a pig and makes a feast to attract more littleuns to join his crew of savages. simon is mistakened to be the beast and is killed.

chap 10: lots of littleuns have been brain washed into joining jacks tribe. at castle rock jack is like a king,

chap 11: ralph decides to get piggys glasses back, in the process piggy gets killed by a giant boulder. and sam and eric are forced to join jacks tribe.

chap 12: samneric were tortued into telling were ralph was hiding they burn him run around the island then get to shore to find a navy officer.

blog 9 twin veiw

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"Sam I can't believe jack, that savage, is forcing us to"

" Join his horrible tribe of animals." said Sam finishing the sentence.

SamnEric looked at jack said no and spit at his feet as a sign of disrespect.



"But what that evil one roger did to piggy it was horrible even more horrible to us"

"Blood and brains everywhere which is ironic cause just the other day I was saying that"

"Piggy was the only on on the island that didn't lose his brain."

"Well the ocean has it now," said Eric with a glum face.

SamnEric were still tied up.

"Bring them to the dungeon," Jack said in a king like voice.

"Jack has so much power that if he were to tell anyone to jump off," said Sam.

"The highest point castle rock they would do it in a heartbeat." finished Eric.

But now jack ordered Roger and Maurice to stifle them both with a rag until they were the dungeon. roger prodded at both Sam and Eric's backs. put them in different sides of the dungeon, being away from each other should encourage each other to join my tribe," said jack with a sinister look in his eyes

blog 10 code blue

"sir that island is on fire I think we should check it out it could be people in trouble" said a cadet to his master cheif
code blue, code blue stop the engine drop the anchor and drop the boats were going to check this island out.
all of the cadets on the boat stop what they were doing and started on the tasks appointed to them. only the master cheif got off the life boat that is going to shore.
"co cheif have them make sure nothing goes wrong and dont set the boat aflame again" said the master cheif
"yes sir" said the co cheif
15 minutes later
"whats going on here" as he said that a scrawney fair har and badly beat up boy ran towards him. He stop only a couple of feet away, and not but two seconds after that did a whole grip of boys run out of the flaming jungle making ululations and holding spears they toped almost emeadeatly. some stayed in the bushes cowering
"are there any grown ups on this island"
the fair hared one took a step forth and told him everything that had happened over _____ amount of time they were there.
all I could doo was visualize how all this could happen they were british boys.
"come on now you are british you could do a better job than this". said the master ceif with great dissapiontment. but the boys were no worse than himself he on a search and destroy mission before he stumbled upon this little island. he elaborated for a while then He sent a message to the cadets on the baot . they heaved the boats and brout all the boys abord

blog 8

Dear diary
yesterday was the worst day ever, the savages (jacks group) attacked us yesterday during our already unmerciful slumber, Ralph and Eric put up a pretty good fight, against each other i had seen them fighting each other while I was cowering in the corner. Seconds before we were attacked I was thinking that things couldn’t get worse and about what they did to me. Piggy wrote as he gesticulated with the hand he wasn't write.

Jack had stifled and smothered my face with his hand so that I couldn't say or see anything. it was dark and all i could do was feel and that wasn't much help because all i felt was someone jump on me and steel my glasses.I can't see. I don't have much self esteem to start with but to have Ralph hold my and to go places it makes me feel like I'm a little kid.

Ever since I have been stranded on this island I've been teased, hit, and humiliated but none of that stuff doesn’t bother me I'm used to it but nothing makes me crackers like when I get my precious glasses tooken away.

Seconds before the attack I was watching the phosphorescent sky and then I got a crazy shudder which only happens when something bad is about to happen it is sort of a spidey sense

blog 7, offering to the beast

we were climbing up to the top of the mountain in a covert motion, we didn't want to be heard by all of the things in the forest we didn't know of, and we especially didn't want to be heard by the beast and jack is certain there is a beast. I'm kind of scared I think I made a blunder coming along on this trip we might be killed.

Ralph and jack are being uncompromising towards each other they should split up the leadership so that both of them could be leader at once. they could both rule as one like a president and a vice president in the U.S instead of sniveling over being leader. It infuriates me that they can never get along. they have like an infinite amount of things to argue about .these tendrils really hurt, they're like big needles. I hope nothing bad happens when we get up there.

"look I'm the pig" said robert
as he said that jack yelled ' maurice you grab his leg I've got his arms"
they both pounced on robert simutaniously, and lifted him as soon as he was lifted of the floor everyone started to prod at his chest with there spears.

"I want to join in" I yelled, but as soon as I got there they had let him go. he ran of I bet he is thinking that wasn't that sage like of him to act like a pig on a pig run.