blog 14 revision of blog 8

Dear diary
yesterday was the worst day ever, the savages (jacks group) attacked us yesterday during our already unmerciful slumber, Ralph and Eric put up a pretty good fight, against each other i had seen them fighting each other while I was cowering in the corner. Seconds before we were attacked I was thinking that things couldn’t get worse and about what they did to me. Piggy wrote as he gesticulated with the hand he wasn't write.

Jack had stifled and smothered my face with his hand so that I couldn't say or see anything. it was dark and all i could do was feel and that wasn't much help because all i felt was someone jump on me and steel my glasses. I can't see. I don't have much self esteem to start with but to have Ralph hold my and to go places it makes me feel like I'm a little kid.

Ever since I have been stranded on this island I've been teased, hit, and humiliated but none of that stuff doesn’t bother me I'm used to it but nothing makes me crackers like when I got my precious glasses taken away.

Seconds before the attack I was watching the phosphorescent sky and then I got a crazy shudder which only happens when something bad is about to happen it is sort of a spidey sense

blog 13 revsion of 9

"Sam I can't believe jack, that savage, is forcing us to"

" Join his horrible tribe of animals." said Sam finishing the sentence.

SamnEric looked at Jack said “no”, and spit at his feet as a sign of disrespect.



"But what that evil one Roger did to Piggy it was horrible even more horrible to us"

"Blood and brains everywhere which is ironic cause just the other day I was saying that"

"Piggy was the only on on the island that didn't lose his brain."

"Well the ocean has it now," said Eric with a glum face.

SamnEric were still tied up.

"Bring them to the dungeon," Jack said in a king like voice.

"Jack has so much power that if he were to tell anyone to jump off," said Sam.

"The highest point castle rock they would do it in a heartbeat." finished Eric.

But now jack ordered Roger and Maurice to stifle them both with a rag until they were the dungeon. roger prodded at both Sam and Eric's backs. put them in different sides of the dungeon, being away from each other should encourage each other to join my tribe," said jack with a sinister look in his eyes

blog 12 testimoney

chap 1: jack leads the choir boys to ralph and piggy. he leads them very well like a king they follow him with great respect. the kids decide ralph is cheif even though jack really wanted the power.

chap 2: jack tells ralp about the pig that had been seen earleir that day that was found in the vines and ralph allows jack lead a group of hunters.

chap 3: jack trail the pig with great skill through the thick tendrils of the jungle but unlike him the pig is used to his surroundings and gets away before jack could make a feast out of him.

chap 4: at this piont of hunting jack has gotton so obsessed that he has forgotton about everything else besides the pig.

chap 5: jack used the beast to scare children into beleiving that he would be a better cheif by protecting them from the beast.

chap 6: ralph lets jack lead the expedition to find the beast on the side of the island that hasn't been explored yet.

chap 7: jack decides to hunt for a pig while on the expedition to find the beast. ralph has never been hunt and was exhilerated when he hit the pig in the snout with his spear but his thunder is stolen quickly when jack shows everyone his big gash.

chap 8: jack calls an assembly and informs everyone that the beast is real. he tells everyone that its eiter him or ralph and makes a tribe that no follows him to.

chap 9: jack gets back with a pig and makes a feast to attract more littleuns to join his crew of savages. simon is mistakened to be the beast and is killed.

chap 10: lots of littleuns have been brain washed into joining jacks tribe. at castle rock jack is like a king,

chap 11: ralph decides to get piggys glasses back, in the process piggy gets killed by a giant boulder. and sam and eric are forced to join jacks tribe.

chap 12: samneric were tortued into telling were ralph was hiding they burn him run around the island then get to shore to find a navy officer.

blog 9 twin veiw

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"Sam I can't believe jack, that savage, is forcing us to"

" Join his horrible tribe of animals." said Sam finishing the sentence.

SamnEric looked at jack said no and spit at his feet as a sign of disrespect.



"But what that evil one roger did to piggy it was horrible even more horrible to us"

"Blood and brains everywhere which is ironic cause just the other day I was saying that"

"Piggy was the only on on the island that didn't lose his brain."

"Well the ocean has it now," said Eric with a glum face.

SamnEric were still tied up.

"Bring them to the dungeon," Jack said in a king like voice.

"Jack has so much power that if he were to tell anyone to jump off," said Sam.

"The highest point castle rock they would do it in a heartbeat." finished Eric.

But now jack ordered Roger and Maurice to stifle them both with a rag until they were the dungeon. roger prodded at both Sam and Eric's backs. put them in different sides of the dungeon, being away from each other should encourage each other to join my tribe," said jack with a sinister look in his eyes

blog 10 code blue

"sir that island is on fire I think we should check it out it could be people in trouble" said a cadet to his master cheif
code blue, code blue stop the engine drop the anchor and drop the boats were going to check this island out.
all of the cadets on the boat stop what they were doing and started on the tasks appointed to them. only the master cheif got off the life boat that is going to shore.
"co cheif have them make sure nothing goes wrong and dont set the boat aflame again" said the master cheif
"yes sir" said the co cheif
15 minutes later
"whats going on here" as he said that a scrawney fair har and badly beat up boy ran towards him. He stop only a couple of feet away, and not but two seconds after that did a whole grip of boys run out of the flaming jungle making ululations and holding spears they toped almost emeadeatly. some stayed in the bushes cowering
"are there any grown ups on this island"
the fair hared one took a step forth and told him everything that had happened over _____ amount of time they were there.
all I could doo was visualize how all this could happen they were british boys.
"come on now you are british you could do a better job than this". said the master ceif with great dissapiontment. but the boys were no worse than himself he on a search and destroy mission before he stumbled upon this little island. he elaborated for a while then He sent a message to the cadets on the baot . they heaved the boats and brout all the boys abord

blog 8

Dear diary
yesterday was the worst day ever, the savages (jacks group) attacked us yesterday during our already unmerciful slumber, Ralph and Eric put up a pretty good fight, against each other i had seen them fighting each other while I was cowering in the corner. Seconds before we were attacked I was thinking that things couldn’t get worse and about what they did to me. Piggy wrote as he gesticulated with the hand he wasn't write.

Jack had stifled and smothered my face with his hand so that I couldn't say or see anything. it was dark and all i could do was feel and that wasn't much help because all i felt was someone jump on me and steel my glasses.I can't see. I don't have much self esteem to start with but to have Ralph hold my and to go places it makes me feel like I'm a little kid.

Ever since I have been stranded on this island I've been teased, hit, and humiliated but none of that stuff doesn’t bother me I'm used to it but nothing makes me crackers like when I get my precious glasses tooken away.

Seconds before the attack I was watching the phosphorescent sky and then I got a crazy shudder which only happens when something bad is about to happen it is sort of a spidey sense

blog 7, offering to the beast

we were climbing up to the top of the mountain in a covert motion, we didn't want to be heard by all of the things in the forest we didn't know of, and we especially didn't want to be heard by the beast and jack is certain there is a beast. I'm kind of scared I think I made a blunder coming along on this trip we might be killed.

Ralph and jack are being uncompromising towards each other they should split up the leadership so that both of them could be leader at once. they could both rule as one like a president and a vice president in the U.S instead of sniveling over being leader. It infuriates me that they can never get along. they have like an infinite amount of things to argue about .these tendrils really hurt, they're like big needles. I hope nothing bad happens when we get up there.

"look I'm the pig" said robert
as he said that jack yelled ' maurice you grab his leg I've got his arms"
they both pounced on robert simutaniously, and lifted him as soon as he was lifted of the floor everyone started to prod at his chest with there spears.

"I want to join in" I yelled, but as soon as I got there they had let him go. he ran of I bet he is thinking that wasn't that sage like of him to act like a pig on a pig run.

BLOG 5, football madness

I remembered when I was in 5th grade and we would always wait for the bell, I mean everyone even the teacher in my class was filled with anticipation for the ring that would seconds later lead into pushing and shoving to the door that lead to the big feild.

Well one day the teacher decided to let us out five minutes later, all of the guys decided to play football, I was the best rb at the school almost no one could catch me, so of course I was chosen second. About five minutes into the game a conflict had arisen, my friend Dominique was the qb and he trough a great spiral but I was just about to put my fingers on the ball when my friend mathew pulled on my arm down, lightning clowds gathered lightning strikes hit a tree , fire was spewing from its limbs, the look in his eyes revealed a deer stuck in headlights he slowy walked away and the clowds vanished to show the sunny clowdless day,

blog 4, the ship

why don't they ever listen to me I'm the group leader I should be listened to not Jack he is nothing but a phycotic maniac that is so wrap up in trying to get meat. I thought it was a mirage, the sun messing with me but he actually took the watchers along and those imbosils let the fire go out, I mean its preposterous that the fact that he would implicate that I would not care If my......I mean the watchers go off and hunt for stupid meat. It makes me so mad I want to shrill and yell as loud as I can.............



"ahh" I said in a hushed tone.

I want to yell but every time I try only a soft whimper comes out. as I sat there gyrating two peices of wood together and opalating the sun through piggy's glasses I started to see jack and his crew they were chanting something i really didn't care i was mad so I ran towards him. when I got to him he said

"look we got meat" Jack siad extremely happy like
"I don't care about the meat! A ship came by and guess what there was no fire so the ship sailed away all because your malevolent sense of judgement, all your fault were still on this island for what a stupid pig." said Ralph
"it's not just any pig it's our first of the many pigs we'll capture"
"wooh yeah, whistles" the crowd of boys said
"but we got meat " jack siad
"that is irrevelent to what I'm saying because of you we will have to be here until " siad Ralph
"but we got meat" said jack again
"quit repeating urself its making ur self look incredulous" siad ralph with determination to make it sink in jack that they missed a ship.

blog 3, meat...meat....MEAT!!!!!!!!!

I'm going crazy and these animals are making me feel weird like something is behind me or even stalking me as if I were pray just like I'm stalking the bloody pig, its got me........... bewildered.

look at me I'm clambering on all fours with a stick and a barb in one hand and holding myself up wth the other. what was that. jack took two furtive looks one to the left and one to the right. the tendrils hanging obove makes it hard for him to see. I heard it again its upfront, thump thump thump were the sounds my feet were making, SSSSSSQQQQQUUEEEEEL look there it is to the right i took a sharp turn ahh the floor to muddy and i hit the trunk of a tree neer by, that really hurt but he was up so fast that the ragged torn clothing he wore almost got ripped off but by the the time he looked around all he could see was the faint glimmer of the sun reflecting of the sea.

since we have arrived my skin looks darker my hair has become lighter my clothes have become tatered but most of all I have developed this....this sort of need for killing need for this pig to die this need to be savage this need for MEAT.

"hey ralph I almost got em"
"where have you been jack your men have been back for an hour now"
"you just don't understand I want to kill a pig and use its bones and festoon to go around my neck"
"this is oppresing you for the past ___ you have been overwhelmed in trying to the life of those pigs"
"you dont understand it may be inscrutable to you but its more understandable to me, I wish I was the group leader so I would'nt have to answer to nobody and I could tell fatty to shut up without anyone say not to say that, and I can enjoy punishing the littluns when ever they act out of line.
"

blog 2, oink oink!!!!

I'm so mad I should be the leader not jack or Ralph, I think I'm more responsible than either of them are, I was the one who worried about taking names and counting up how many boys there are, is despise and scorn Jack he is always telling me to shut up and always calling me fatty if it weren't Ralph telling everyone that my name was............ piggy I would probably be called by my real name_____. It was irresistable to tell him not to call me piggy but i did it, I guess it is my fault. I wish i didn't tell him about the conch and just did it myself instead of him getting the credit I would have and that would probably lead up to me being the leader. and especially I can't beleive Ralph chose simom over me to go on that quest to check if this is an island or not, but I guess I'm not a good feild worker what if they come across a big animal and I'm not that fast so how would I get away before it gets me. I guess he is right I would not on a type of job like this, I'll be nimble and try not to be scornful towards jack. look theyre back. "okay we are indeed stranded on an island" ralph says, "ithink it would be best to have a band of hunters" jack says to ralph. I think it be best for me to stand up and speak. piggy gets up and takes the conchand says "we need to come up with a plan to get off this island if a ship or plane comes by it will not know that were down here we should have a fire in the highest mountain" i say. " yeah come on guys" says jack and takes of towards the montain and is shortly followed by all of the other kids, and suprisingly Ralph drops the conch and runs off to go with all the other kids. " I'm am getting tired of all of this disordely fashion I'm filled with tumult" I say. piggy walks over to the conch and picks it up, and starts up the hill to see what they're doing. as i got through the clearing of bushes that were beteween me and the other boys, i had seen all of the boys standing around a bunch of warp, dried branches. and then out of no were i was ambushed and jack jumped on me and tore my glasses of my face. " we can use this to start the fire" he said. " i can't see give me back my glasses" i said. it was very officious of him to take my glasses like that. then he through them at me and when i put them back on they were broken and i was blinded by a burst of fire i ran away and started crying.

blog 1,the light in the sky, the sound in my ear

The tension on this plane is unbreackable thought billy while he sat there on that plane so cramped it was hard to breath. then there was a blinding light that was shortly folowed by a harsh clamor. I looked around and seen some of of the boys in a ghostly pallor, I was afraid but I looked back and the plane had been blown apart a seat behind mine I got to my feet and clambered my way across frightened boys ahead of me i looked into the cockpit window and had seen that the pilot jumbling with the walky talky tryed to get into the cockpit to ask ask what I could do, not to sound vain but my father showed me to be decorous so I wanted to help. there was another strident and my world went black. i woke up the next mornig next to the people i was sitting next to on the plane but this time i was lying on hot sand and quivering very hard "hey Nick, George, Mike and Kevin wake up" i said, as i was saying that i was speculating on how did we get here and what had happened up there in the sky and especially where are we then kevin woke up and interposed my thinking. i looked at him and asked "where we" he didn't say anything he just shrugged. i looked at nick and had seen the debret of the plane layed upon his chest that kind of looked like a grating i laughed cuase it was like he was trapped which i would later find that we were. i got up and looked around and seen these vines with what looked like mangos hanging from them, i was so hungry that i devoured two whole without thinkig if they were safe to to eat or not, by the time i finished my fourth one nick and george had woken up and all four of us had started to eat mangos then there was a sound like trumpet then we heard it again and again it keptt going i dont know if it was the sugar in the mangos or something all i knew was wanted to know what that sound was so i took of toward the sound at a pace i had never ran before wi thin a matter of minutes i had seen the maker of the sound, a tall boy with a portly round looking kid standing next to a lagoon, as i got closer i had seen about 100 kids just so many the portly look ing kid was asking all of us our names then an older look kid i think his name is jack suggested that we have leader and so i said "the guy with the trumpet sounding thingy" and most of the population agreed i said it cause if he was smart enough gather us here he should be smart enough to guide us to go back home, as i said it jack looked filled with indignation.